Monday, December 4, 2006

Will The Weather Change? Comments

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So many pieces of my broken heart
Even if I fix them there remains a crack
Spilling drops of tears of pain and sorrow
Where has the hope gone?
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Kavitha Krishnamurthy
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Admirer Foru 22 June 2007

Great poems. You've really got a way with words. Your poems convey a painful past A constant yearning for a peaceful future Conveying powerful messages Conjuring vivid images Hints of sadness and hope A fight between two The inner girl trying to come out and cry But the outer is clearly the winner Conquest of the past is clear Endurance is evident Soul searching can be postponed As there's a lot more to enjoy Smile and enjoy your perfect weekend. Never knew that your simplicity and silence hid such a huge talent. Keep it up and have a perfect weekend just the way you described it.

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