Wednesday, February 3, 2016

Will The Door Be Opened Once More? Comments

Rating: 4.9

She sits by the window motionless
Looking at the sky getting darker
Inside her a sea swells, tides of memories
Beat her heart, the only keepsake she has
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Valsa George
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Hazel Durham 29 April 2018

Beautifully written with great depth of emotions of having loved and lost with inspired lines that shine like that twinkling star far! This is one of my favourites!

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Akhtar Jawad 07 September 2017

In her dark hours, she sees a star twinkling far! The teinkling star of hope keeps us alive. We all live in our hopes and dreams. Valsa George has so nicely penned this poem that reader becomes a character of this poem. Great poem,

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2016

Tightly spliced! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Loke Kok Yee 09 February 2016

love won and lost, lost at great cost pain lingers on life is all forlorn Thanks Valsa

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 February 2016

Hope everything turns out well with this unfortunate one perched eternally by a window. Prayers. A poignant write - the Valsa George specialty.

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Kavya . 04 February 2016

I think thats what love is! Temporary! Its a phase of live that everyone encounters wherein the love overpours and then all of a sudden everything vanishes in thin air, one of the partner betrays leaving the other one sobbing in dark hours in their memory! ! ! ! IS THAT LOVE! Thats why maby be we say People FALL in Love! Nicely written Mam...but no one should ever go through such a scary phase in reminiscence of the golden memories spent together in the past leaving only memories for the future!

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Nosheen Irfan 04 February 2016

Beautiful, beautiful. A profound write on lost love and the cherished memories. The wait and the hope never leaves us. The expectation of the door opening some day will always be there. Written with beauty n perfection.10

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2016

So many thought and form of questions....Nice work, Madam...

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Dimitrios Galanis 03 February 2016

I amire the vocabulary used.For first time I see the word gyrate which has a greek origin too.A hoard, wealth of words builds the good poem.Best regards.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 February 2016

There is hope of stars twinkling far. How the happy moments end without a warning, no one knows. True love should not end that way since it should be of equal intensity from both sides.

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Kelly Kurt 03 February 2016

A wonderfully written poem, Valsa. I think that many men have the same thoughts at times.

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