Will O' The Wisp Comments
On a grimmest evening...
Salty breeze was blowing...
Cacophony of birdcall was provoking...
That aroma;
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an animated poem with deep feelings in it............v nice write...........njoied reading thoroughly especially the last punch line!
Utsav Patel, first of all I want to thank you for visiting my page and for nice comment.secondly, you have great potential in writing just keep it up, and of course if you need any thing i'll be glade to help.
Very vividly delineated images, beautifully contrived intimacy, and a dollop of pain and anguish. A very mature poem.
Nice. Very visual. Read my deadpan sociopath. Reminds me similar. This is great.
And nothing but time is what makes a fantastic poem like this. In the magic land of dreams, you are enjoying with your lass till the cigar burns the finger. Good man! I really liked it!
A well written verse! Try to make it more objective so the viewers might see their stories in yours! Evoked that sense again of the cigarette! Loved it!
Beautiful poem, through and through. As Akshaya proclaimed, it's like a day dream. Lovely write, Utsav. Lovely write. Cassandra J.
Deluding and elusive will'o the wisp of love! Powerful images, young man! Enjoyed! !
A beautiful poem of a love that was lost and was not meant to be. Everything was painted like a dream that was ended when awakened. Also the pain from the cigarette burns jolted one back to reality. An inspiring write.
a beautiful poem.......lost in love......waiting for the love to return......good write
A beautiful poem and the end - HA! HA! nice A beautiful poem, enjoyable. THE END HAS THE TWIST ! Very nice!
Oh! the love you never had is better than the love you lost...a brilliantly pinned piece the beach the sand beautiful metaphors..bravo
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7/19/2025 3:13:43 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful poem.I must say you have a beautiful imagery of thoughts.The way you describe the nature surrounding your love is excellent. The feeling in your hearts in such a beautiful atmosphere is evolving in this poem.i liked this poem very much.