Will I Still Go To Heaven If I Envy? Comments

Will a brother do, Love duncan

Do you think the rent your mum left in your sould will ever heal?

We can hope. What if someone sent her this poem? As to the title of this poem, the Devil may be a tolerant character but even he would not be able to cope with your soul. Best H

Of course you will go to heaven...your poetry opens a book that tells about a character with a good heart. I totally agree with Raynette.

Mary, if you take a look around you, I think you will find that there are many 'moms' around you with love to share. And I really like the way you ended this poem. avr

Some day we'll talk, Mary. I know how this feels...sorta like on the outside, looking in at Dick and Jane families you never knew. You have made your own 'Dick and Jane' family. Keep your focus there, Honey. Raynette

This poem genuinely tugs at the heart, at the end of the day, we all remain children searching for love we didn't receive or lost or desperately want to relive.

Well your on your way to the new form of poetry Mary, another good one from you. That 'Mom's' still upsetting you isn't she, but perhaps expressing it this way is one way of dealing with it. Hope you aren't troubled too much sweetheart, keep that smile going. Love Ernestine XXX