Sunday, May 1, 2022

Will I See You Tonight? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I long for the night,
When I'll hold you so tight,
In my dreams,
Once again we are young,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jacob Wentz 19 June 2025

Easlily one of my favorite poets I wish i could make mine sound as sweet

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Thank you Jacob! : ) : ) : )

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Timber Koleden 09 June 2025

A superb poem! Thank you for the wonderful imagery! The story is wonderfully crafted! I enjoyed the line about riding on the big dipper! Thank you for a lovely poem!

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Many thanks Timber! So glad you enjoyed my poem. Regards x

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

Jayne, I 'love' your story and its rhyming. Keep up the good work! ***** bri : ) and to my favorites on PH

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Jayne Louise Davies 17 April 2024

Thank you for your comments Bri : ) Very much appreciated : )

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

Re: 'A walk to the fair, We so loved it there, And on the Big Dipper we ride, ', and I bet 'fair' means an amusement park & 'the Big Dipper' is a fun ride there, NOT a huge cluster of stars in the sky.

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

'Making a right noisy din.'...I bet many will not know what is meant by 'right'. I THINK it means 'truly' or 'truthfully' or 'certainly'. Hm?

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Esselebor Ebhojie 10 June 2023

Really tender and caring

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Thank you Esselebor : )

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Savita Tyagi 25 January 2023

Lovely poem. There comes a time when the world of dreams become so appealing. One is fortunate to be rewarded with beautiful dreams.

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 January 2023

Thank you so much Savita x

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Sheryl Deane 21 January 2023

Loved reading this poem.

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 January 2023

Thank you Sheryl x So glad you liked it x

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me poet yeps poet 05 December 2022

lovely beach poem I like icecream but all come in my dreams

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Jayne Louise Davies 05 December 2022

Thanks for your lovely comment x So appreciated!

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me poet yeps poet 05 December 2022

I love the beaches and icecreams but all come in my dreams lovely poemy ma'am

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 January 2023

Thank you for your kind comment x Much appreciate it.

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A lovely poem well expressed. Very touching. In our dreams and memories, our loved ones with us. Congratulations for a well deserved Poem Of the Day. An accolade you truly deserved.

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Jayne Davies 03 May 2022

Thank you for your lovely comment. I so appreciate it.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 May 2022

Oh those wonderful memories with the one you still love in your heart! And what a wonderful poem. Congrats, Jayne on a well deserved POD!

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Jayne Davies 03 May 2022

Thank you Richard. For your encouraging words.

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Jayne Davies 02 May 2022

Thank you everyone for your kind comments. It means so much x

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Chinedu Dike 02 May 2022

A beautiful creation elegantly crafted from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as POD, remain enriched.

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Kim Barney 02 May 2022

Congratulations, Jayne, for Member Poem of the Day! Very nice.

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Jayne Davies 02 May 2022

Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comment x

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I love the poem for its magnificent positivity, dreams and hopes - all coming true. And the ice cream too..: }..wonderful Jayne...Top score

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Heartiest Congratulations for the poem of the day. So happy to see your poem Jayne.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 May 2022

another beautiful masterpiece

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Exciting and beautiful.. " Once again, /We'll be young, // You and me. ". Loved it, Jayne.congratulations and 5 *s…

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2022

A fabulous poem dear poetess, many congratulations! !

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Jayne Davies 02 May 2022

Thank you so much. It means a lot x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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