I long for the night,
When I'll hold you so tight,
In my dreams,
Once again we are young,
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A superb poem! Thank you for the wonderful imagery! The story is wonderfully crafted! I enjoyed the line about riding on the big dipper! Thank you for a lovely poem!
Jayne, I 'love' your story and its rhyming. Keep up the good work! ***** bri : ) and to my favorites on PH
Re: 'A walk to the fair, We so loved it there, And on the Big Dipper we ride, ', and I bet 'fair' means an amusement park & 'the Big Dipper' is a fun ride there, NOT a huge cluster of stars in the sky.
'Making a right noisy din.'...I bet many will not know what is meant by 'right'. I THINK it means 'truly' or 'truthfully' or 'certainly'. Hm?
Lovely poem. There comes a time when the world of dreams become so appealing. One is fortunate to be rewarded with beautiful dreams.
lovely beach poem I like icecream but all come in my dreams
I love the beaches and icecreams but all come in my dreams lovely poemy ma'am
A lovely poem well expressed. Very touching. In our dreams and memories, our loved ones with us. Congratulations for a well deserved Poem Of the Day. An accolade you truly deserved.
Oh those wonderful memories with the one you still love in your heart! And what a wonderful poem. Congrats, Jayne on a well deserved POD!
A beautiful creation elegantly crafted from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as POD, remain enriched.
I love the poem for its magnificent positivity, dreams and hopes - all coming true. And the ice cream too..: }..wonderful Jayne...Top score
Heartiest Congratulations for the poem of the day. So happy to see your poem Jayne.
Exciting and beautiful.. " Once again, /We'll be young, // You and me. ". Loved it, Jayne.congratulations and 5 *s…
Easlily one of my favorite poets I wish i could make mine sound as sweet
Thank you Jacob! : ) : ) : )