' Will 'I' Ever Be 'Me' ' Comments

Whatever i do is nothing for me All i do is only to achieve and for the world to please i've buried myself my soul it seems i am a stone i am mere flesh with no dreams of my ow very very good poem. the search for identity. living to please others will kill us. you are a unique being. your uniqueness you will lose when you live to please others. Be yourself always. be strong to stand on your own legs. thank you dear Poetess. God bless you

Believe me - This is just amazing would be an understatement... Coz you have pulled out something that is very true.. We all feel like this, Its just that we let go of that feeling and concentrate on the more mundane tasks.. Nevertheless, a really good write... Do keep writing... - Vinod

Awesome..i liked it.. '' Me from mirror stares at i ''gud line Aastha..

Great words and expression.

A confrontation expressed with awesome words! ! !

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! really grt... smtims i too feel like this...though i'm only 15, i long 4 those carefree days, when i did evrythng wntd 2 without caring others.... a lot of truth in dis poem.. kp writing...

a poem of thoughts...........philosophical..........10

When i will be me. your poem has compelled me to think. nice poem

awesome.....; -) is it really about you..?

hei, this is the world, where a mere fleash can hug its blood heart have the flower soul smell it

Rhythmic. Really the real state of a modern person who is always under rat race.Peace of mind, far beyond. I am moved with this write-up as I am also a part of the so called Corporate World.Running thy name...may be our other identity!

i love the title of the poem, really innovative..another awesome poem

what a great thought dear... now after reading this i'll think when i will be me. great job

I'm shaken by your thoughts really.... People can be counted on your fingertips who can actually realize the thing you've written... The definition you gave of the terms 'i' n 'me' is the best i've ever read... Very well written....

Seemingly the more you do in the name of freedom, the more chains are added, barriers to break, and boundaries to stay in. And the older you get the more image out weighs imagination. I really like your concept of ''i'' and 'Me' in this poem. I love you, and that's from the world keep writing.

YES! You will ever be you. I like the rhyming and lineation. Thank you for showing it to the world.

life is indeed a unidirectional and merciless vector... and yet with all the sham and shame....it still is awesome powerful and beautiful in da rt places.. great ideas penned well.....keep penning cheers

gud one lil' champ a 10+ for u

Painted with a philosophical profoundity that is powerful. Well done my friend.10/10

Nice poem :) Have a wonderful day tc