Will Poem by Galina Italyanskaya

Will

Rating: 5.0


Those mountains are far
They stand in desert lands
And there a magic star
Will fall into your hands

Those mountains are blue
With shining snowy caps
I saw how eagles flew
Above their craggy gaps

Those mountains are high
Like people's dearest hopes
One day your route will tie
Their steep enticing slopes

And on the very top
Amid the endless sky
Your crazy heart will hop
Your soul will breathe a sigh

And nobody will know
How heavenly you feel
'Cause you can wish, and go
And get there, if you will

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(Ukhta,08 October 2020)

Will
Thursday, October 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: endeavour,hope,mountains,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2020

The poem gets the highest rating from me,5 stars!

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Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2020

It's a beautiful poem with an equally beautiful graphic; loved it. Loved the free flowing rhymes too. May I have the privilege to quote these four lines that I loved most: 'Those mountains are blue With shining snowy caps I saw how eagles flew Above their craggy gaps'. The poem deserves to be selected as the MPOTD.

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Galina Italyanskaya 14 October 2020

Thank you, dear poet, for reading and commenting!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 October 2020

Its good with good rhymes.

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