Monday, September 8, 2014

Wilful Vagabond Comments

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Uprooted and repotted
Just so many times
I don't remember
Feel of Earth
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 08 September 2014

Thanks for the encouraging words and reading my poem

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Donnie Wolff 08 September 2014

Lovely poem, solid foundations maybe... But what life experience and great poetry comes out of the block. Yes the cliche white picket fence sounds oh so wonderful.. But how boring... Lifes too short for boring, only long enough for great tales of adventure, love attained love lost, poetry written of each of these moments. Its the moments... Ahhh the moments that are memory.. But i do agree in finding solidarity in yourself. Therefore every step you take may be adventure or unknown, but its solid.

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Achill Lad 08 September 2014

A sad tale. Maybe you should put good solid foundations in place next time.

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