Saturday, September 26, 2009

Wildflower Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amid the rubble of crumbling concrete
a seed, unwittingly sown, sends its tender shoots
pushing toward love’s light.
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Allan O 08 November 2009

very lovely again...i like your use of a wildflower...but then the beauty of any flower is touching..even if it be only a daisy in the spring....i am a rose person of course when you read thru alot of my writing you will come to notice that...a blooming rose touched by the tips of my fingers...is like a touch to a childs hand..tender and soft as the rose petals feel....lovely write..thank you deb... ~^..^

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Emily Oldham 31 October 2009

Beautiful poem with great imagery, thanks

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Deborah Downes

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