Wildfire Comments

I read this again today. In my comment below I said it is one of the best poems I've ever read. I think it fair to say that the qualifier 'one of' can be done away with. This is absolute brilliance if ever such a thing existed.

Wow! An absolutely stunning piece. I'm not sure how even to go about commenting on it. You break down in exquisite detail how you desire to love unconditionally and hopefully receive the same in return. But you never Expect the return, only hope that maybe one day it will be there. You are more than willing to give your heart away, if you can find the one worthy of having it and then to convince them they can give you yours as well by loving them so intensely that they have no other choice. You stand on the outskirts of love looking in and scream I Am Rright Here! In conclusion you pose the thought if only you knew how to take control and demand what you want from the world. If you ask me, that is exactly what this poem does! It takes control of your world and forces it to submit to your will. Honestly one of the best poems I think I've ever read. To my favorites. Thanks so much for sharing