Friday, December 4, 2015

Wildfire Comments

Rating: 4.7

With your fire
My heart is alight
I implore you
Let it burn
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2018

A fantastic expression has been made towards love through wildfire. The beginning of poem attracts the readers as well as the concluding. Let me quote some lines......... With your fire......Let it burn Till the end of time For it has taught me To love, to feel To rejoice, to heal Its hot tingle is no pain Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

Love! Till the end of time. Nice piece of work.

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Mike Smith 05 April 2016

Speaks a great truth. Passion of the degree described in the poem can seem (and often is) insustainable. And so, the fireball, raging and uninhibited, eventually burns itself down to black soot. Phenomenal images to bring to life this concept of an intense love in its waning hours. Beautifully expressed

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Manonton Dalan 08 January 2016

I read this twice and every time I do it t flash a different meaning ..conversationist

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 December 2015

Passionately written love poem with an even flow of emotions. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Manonton Dalan 04 December 2015

so beautiful...thanks for sharing

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