Wilderness Comments

this darkness of the night and the thick clouds. and You have left all of us far behind the WILDERNESS OF ALL TIMES LOVELY RHYMES

'Swim in the love of the ocean and write poems And dream of a heavenly garden blooming with moony flowers and starry shine' Despite all hardships of life, life is beautiful for a person who is positive and brave enough to face life......! Beautiful

The birds seem wingless and directionless, The wind is chill and hard on the nose, ...Birds love to fly with much freedom. Moony flowers bloom with greater beauty. Dual perception is reflected very well. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned...5 stars

In the dream of a heavenly garden Waves of uncertainity vanishes. Nicely penned poem

Magical! Enchanting poem

Excellent O' leader of the life now leads me through this darkness of the night and the thick clouds.

Swim in the ocean and write poem And wakeup screaming Nicely woven wilderness.