Sometimes i dream
With my eyes wide awake
Locked in a state of trance
Restrained by the wild thoughts
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I love this original piece with inspired lines that takes us on a wild journey!
You've touched on an mte resting topic in your poem about temptation and the influence of wild thoughts. I like the line 'blanketed by sheets of wild exotic thoughts.' A dangerous play on words. Nice imagery and expression.