Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Wild Thoughts Comments

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Sometimes i dream
With my eyes wide awake
Locked in a state of trance
Restrained by the wild thoughts
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Pamela Sinicrope 11 January 2016

You've touched on an mte resting topic in your poem about temptation and the influence of wild thoughts. I like the line 'blanketed by sheets of wild exotic thoughts.' A dangerous play on words. Nice imagery and expression.

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Hazel Durham 17 December 2014

I love this original piece with inspired lines that takes us on a wild journey!

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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