Sunday, June 16, 2019

Wild Things Comments

Rating: 4.8

If wolves could sing.
They would do their thing.
They would sing about chasing deer.
And never having any fear.
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Lamar Cole
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Chinedu Dike 05 December 2020

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Great lines nicely put together. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 September 2019

They would sing about loving things that are wild/And devouring their food with wolf smiles....sparkling expression! A great work! My pleasure revisiting it!

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A B Faniki 15 September 2019

I enjoyed it. It was a fun read keep them coming. Cheers

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Uche Nwanze 05 August 2019

If... Captivates me, awesome piece. Thanks for sharing

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 June 2019

wild can think of life also; but wildly thief can think of life also; but in stealing way tyrant can think of rule also; but in blood thirsty mind cheater can think of life also; but in deceiving scheme revolutionist can think of freedom also; but with a sanguinary fighting

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A meaningful poem; wolves cannot think in any other way except his own wild way. Thanks for sharing

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 29 June 2019

I see a very profound meaning in it. Wolves, by the sound of the word, brings in a fearful feeling. Yet, they too have their own qualities which are to be valued. Very much thought provoking. Thanks for sharing. You very well deserve the positioning. Congrats. x

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 June 2019

A lovely and unique write on animals. Well crafted with a tinge of humor. Congratulations!

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Sandra Feldman 29 June 2019

A very imaginative and animal loving poem. Different and all together, touching. Congratulations on your poem being, Poem of the Day.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2019

They would sing about loving things that are wild. And devouring their food with wolf smiles. animals and wolf. a great portrayal. tony

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Lamar, Hearty congratulations! Wolves are supposed to be cunning and not an animal so loving like the other pets. But after reading your cute little poem, i have developed a soft corner for the wolves who can smile. Humorous poem....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 June 2019

A sort of philosophical write. Very nicely done.Congrats.

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Tom Allport 29 June 2019

A wonderful write of wolves that bite.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 June 2019

Wolves in the forest! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jane Campion 29 June 2019

Great humor. Loved it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 June 2019

A wonderful pretty poem of the day. Congrats, sir Lamar for being chosen......10++++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2019

A 10 Full Score for this Beautiful and Brave Song. Amazing theme. in the Netherlands, there have been born the FIRST wolves babies recently. It was on the TV news. Before these babies had been born, the wolf is almost no more. Now the government is happy to know this. Truly Fantastic poem, Lamar. ENJOY your day. Regards, SFC

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2019

CONGRATULATIONS, dear Lamar, This is a true Wolf´s Song, very Strong, Powerfully worded by a Wolf´s Son, by A Wolf´s Admirer. A very fascinating read. This is a poem created by a poet with a soul closest to a Wolf. Mesmerizing poem, I have enjoyed very much. My felicitations for this winning Prize The Member Poem Of The Day.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2019

They would sing about loving things that are wild......a fabulous imaginary construction! Simply a short and splendid write! Many congratulations for this wonderful creation of yours being featured today as Poem of the day!

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