Sunday, August 3, 2008

! ! ! Wild Stream By The Eternity! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.6

Rune of passion when holds the mystery
sympathy never dries empty by the reeks
eloquence of love parades across the bliss
the reason never seems to falter by the belief
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Bharati Nayak 25 November 2015

Love that Wild Stream By The Eternity- - - Love is eternal____Love never follows foot prints of narrow endings.It is unselfish- -It fills the heart with unending hope and bliss.Thanks for sharing the wonderful piece of poem.

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Clarence Prince 17 July 2015

Silence mystery, love, redemption, emancipated, deliverance, and eternity! Those are all glorious words of hope, into this poem, along with others! Well done, Dr Subhendu!

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Michelle Kafka 15 August 2009

A deep moving poem with excellent word choices. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 November 2008

Wild sream of eternity, consisting of joy and serenity, Full of alluring charm, carries the world in it's arm. Hit

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Cecil Hickman 26 October 2008

beautifully written with depth of feelings and emotions very well penned, , graet write in poetry, , , blessings...Cecil

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Well... at the risk of plagiarism, I say the work was thought out with a great deal of eloquence. And if narrow endings are anything to go by, I'm hooked! Leave it at that, Doc!

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Alexander Hale 05 October 2008

'Trust still reels through the hidden dream'. Amazing. I'm jealous, your writing is breathtaking. This poem is way more than a 10.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 October 2008

This seems to be your Masterpiece Doctor and the wild stream flows ever like the warm blood in veins. 'Sympathy never dries empty by the reeks.'

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Moushumi moushumi 03 October 2008

A streaming sensation i feel when i read yours. How could you be so artistic in using words? sometimes i feel jealous of ur ability. This poem we can call it a true piece of 'magical realism'. I request u to read GARCIA MARQUEZ. Then i could share some treasure about that.

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Heather Barrett 02 October 2008

Thats a great poem i would love for you to read some of my entry and give me some pointers you have done a really great job i give you a 10

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Albina Barkhudaryan 28 September 2008

Your words are a work of art...I would love to hear your opinion about my style of poetry...

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that was an awsome poem you deserve a 10....

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Lonnie Hicks 23 September 2008

Humm This is avery different kind of poetry and at first seem unfamiliar to me. But imagistically I loved the color and the capacity to make the reader pay attention to every word. It is poetry, in my view which makes the reader look behind the curtain to discover the gems there. Great work.

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Anand Dixit 23 September 2008

I loved it. I have given a 10.

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Jay P. Narain 22 September 2008

Dr. Kar, I love your poems. I am glad to see that we have great poets like you from India.

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Cilene Farrell 22 September 2008

Lovely imagery, great choice of words to express the mood of the poem, I like it!

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Layla Joseph 22 September 2008

this poem is really colourful it really speaks to the heart nice one

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Nun Ya Bizness 21 September 2008

trust still reels through the hidden dream beautiful line and beautiful poem. Kudos

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 September 2008

This is out of the world. I honestly feel unworthy of commenting on this. All I can say is thank you.

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Mimi Mata 14 September 2008

Dr Subhendu, A soul mate love, a connection with eternal emotion and spirit that will always find a way to redeem solidity...Precisely done with passion... Read With Appreciation and Gratitude, Mimi C Mata

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