Rune of passion when holds the mystery
sympathy never dries empty by the reeks
eloquence of love parades across the bliss
the reason never seems to falter by the belief
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Silence mystery, love, redemption, emancipated, deliverance, and eternity! Those are all glorious words of hope, into this poem, along with others! Well done, Dr Subhendu!
A deep moving poem with excellent word choices. Thanks for sharing.
Wild sream of eternity, consisting of joy and serenity, Full of alluring charm, carries the world in it's arm. Hit
beautifully written with depth of feelings and emotions very well penned, , graet write in poetry, , , blessings...Cecil
Well... at the risk of plagiarism, I say the work was thought out with a great deal of eloquence. And if narrow endings are anything to go by, I'm hooked! Leave it at that, Doc!
'Trust still reels through the hidden dream'. Amazing. I'm jealous, your writing is breathtaking. This poem is way more than a 10.
This seems to be your Masterpiece Doctor and the wild stream flows ever like the warm blood in veins. 'Sympathy never dries empty by the reeks.'
A streaming sensation i feel when i read yours. How could you be so artistic in using words? sometimes i feel jealous of ur ability. This poem we can call it a true piece of 'magical realism'. I request u to read GARCIA MARQUEZ. Then i could share some treasure about that.
Thats a great poem i would love for you to read some of my entry and give me some pointers you have done a really great job i give you a 10
Your words are a work of art...I would love to hear your opinion about my style of poetry...
that was an awsome poem you deserve a 10....
Humm This is avery different kind of poetry and at first seem unfamiliar to me. But imagistically I loved the color and the capacity to make the reader pay attention to every word. It is poetry, in my view which makes the reader look behind the curtain to discover the gems there. Great work.
Dr. Kar, I love your poems. I am glad to see that we have great poets like you from India.
Lovely imagery, great choice of words to express the mood of the poem, I like it!
this poem is really colourful it really speaks to the heart nice one
trust still reels through the hidden dream beautiful line and beautiful poem. Kudos
This is out of the world. I honestly feel unworthy of commenting on this. All I can say is thank you.
Dr Subhendu, A soul mate love, a connection with eternal emotion and spirit that will always find a way to redeem solidity...Precisely done with passion... Read With Appreciation and Gratitude, Mimi C Mata
Love that Wild Stream By The Eternity- - - Love is eternal____Love never follows foot prints of narrow endings.It is unselfish- -It fills the heart with unending hope and bliss.Thanks for sharing the wonderful piece of poem.