Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Wild People's Wild Ride! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just a bicycle to ride around this neighborhood,
Of six continents, mountains and thick woods,
A float underneath makes a hovercraft to sail,
Oceans of knowledge and wisdom parasail.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Left a comment 3 minutes ago...Now, I see it did not take....Lets try it again...until the 1st one inevitably shows up! An impressive penning, as always can be expected by you...It be The Nature Of The Beast' that is at play here and has always been as long as their has been mankind...It's an avaricious mindset formula of want...want more...can't get enough...want it all....And now, here we are in 2012, licking wounds we never should have inflicted in ourselves(meaning society & their governments as a whole) I like the language here, especially the many underlyings employed by clever metaphor ~FjR~

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Captain Cur 26 July 2012

Your poems convey meanings and lessons. Economies built around greed are doomed to failure as has now become all to evident. Universities must teach sound moral, ethical and economic philosophies or collaspe is inevitable.

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