Wild Horses Comments

wonderful cognitive metaphor: ''Smoke and the absurd Of the present moment Darken The memory of a time'' and an excellent surrealistic poem.....10+++++ from Mari

Smoke and the absurd Of the present moment Darken The memory of a time Where wild horses Were grazing freely The ember tasting graze a roamntic poem and done in a sweet storical type..liked it and the way you did this poem is fantastic and meaningful..well done...and hope you never stop writing more poems..10/10

Darken The memory of a time Where wild horses Were grazing freely The ember tasting graze as cryptic as the origin of your name from 'John'