Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Wild Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

A simple girl she was
a simple woman she’ll be
lives in her simplest dream
future... God makes her free...
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Eyan Desir 26 April 2010

haha u and your poems.......

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Melissa Smith 01 August 2009

Nice choice of words and intense flow. LOVED it! ! 10+!

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Antonio Liao 29 July 2009

your great poet...my salute and vow of respect in the poem you share for the society of poet...a poem of reality......everything ends to begin again like a wild flower......the last line could be the last defense....i like it best...God bless...a 10 +++++

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Melvin Banggollay 27 July 2009

wala akong masabni kundi maganda at nakaka-inlove ang yong tula. I love you, melvin

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Noel Horlanda 25 July 2009

This piece of work is lovely indeed, supposed to be wild but not literally, the creature was so very sweet indeed, sweet as a nectar. This also proved that the author is also so sweet as a wild flower like the lady in waiting. And with a feminine touch that is...

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 July 2009

this is so beautiful isn't it..... i loved this one.. beautiful one by a graceful sweet lady indeed! ! ! with love shan

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Miriam Maia Padua 25 July 2009

runs with depth... Lady grace becomes more mysterious to me... who is that Wild Flower? hope its me...(smile) In the middle of Mt. Apo...haha.. I love this piece..meaningful..makes my brain dazzles.. 10+++++ lovelots, Maia

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Eyan Desir 25 July 2009

This poem makes me think It is not straight forward. It well written Gracy....

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Ravi Sathasivam 25 July 2009

Great imaginative thoughts, turned into a beautiful poem. Well done. Thanks for sharing with me

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Ken E Hall 25 July 2009

Nature has no supermarkets but everything is fresh and everything is hungry well done tale to the last line regards

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Alf Hutchison 23 July 2009

Naughty monster! ! well done grace regards Alf

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Rafique Farooqi 23 July 2009

Very decent poem.....well written

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Joseph Poewhit 23 July 2009

The last line is very -----? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Deborah Cromer 23 July 2009

Very creative and naturally deadly. Nicely arranged by thought. DC

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Subroto Chatterjee 23 July 2009

A wild flower....a pitcher plant...venus fly-trap? Now, a honey-trap.. Cheers. Subroto

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Lynda Robson 23 July 2009

Great poem Grace, wonderful imaginative thoughts, 10 Lynda xx

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Randy Hogan 23 July 2009

Its not over! for to tomorrow the hunger will grow to the the point of must feed or be consumed... Is it me or is this poem a little naughty.... anyways I love it Randy~*~

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Saadat Tahir 23 July 2009

a black widow spider tale.... oblique blends to direct....the simple flowers are scattered all over the worlds meadows.....not self aware...so to say dont know the naunces of the pout...the swaying rout...sometimes...just sometimes they turn out to be the venus fly trap.....snap an its over very nice lines.... a definite aspect of everyday life well written cheers

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Ramesh T A 23 July 2009

A different plant utterly against others' nature is wonderfully expressed in this poem!

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Luwi Habte 23 July 2009

nice expression buddy i love this one too Luwi

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