A simple girl she was
a simple woman she’ll be
lives in her simplest dream
future... God makes her free...
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your great poet...my salute and vow of respect in the poem you share for the society of poet...a poem of reality......everything ends to begin again like a wild flower......the last line could be the last defense....i like it best...God bless...a 10 +++++
wala akong masabni kundi maganda at nakaka-inlove ang yong tula. I love you, melvin
This piece of work is lovely indeed, supposed to be wild but not literally, the creature was so very sweet indeed, sweet as a nectar. This also proved that the author is also so sweet as a wild flower like the lady in waiting. And with a feminine touch that is...
this is so beautiful isn't it..... i loved this one.. beautiful one by a graceful sweet lady indeed! ! ! with love shan
runs with depth... Lady grace becomes more mysterious to me... who is that Wild Flower? hope its me...(smile) In the middle of Mt. Apo...haha.. I love this piece..meaningful..makes my brain dazzles.. 10+++++ lovelots, Maia
This poem makes me think It is not straight forward. It well written Gracy....
Great imaginative thoughts, turned into a beautiful poem. Well done. Thanks for sharing with me
Nature has no supermarkets but everything is fresh and everything is hungry well done tale to the last line regards
Very creative and naturally deadly. Nicely arranged by thought. DC
A wild flower....a pitcher plant...venus fly-trap? Now, a honey-trap.. Cheers. Subroto
Its not over! for to tomorrow the hunger will grow to the the point of must feed or be consumed... Is it me or is this poem a little naughty.... anyways I love it Randy~*~
a black widow spider tale.... oblique blends to direct....the simple flowers are scattered all over the worlds meadows.....not self aware...so to say dont know the naunces of the pout...the swaying rout...sometimes...just sometimes they turn out to be the venus fly trap.....snap an its over very nice lines.... a definite aspect of everyday life well written cheers
A different plant utterly against others' nature is wonderfully expressed in this poem!
haha u and your poems.......