Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Wild And Untameable. Comments

Rating: 5.0

He bent his long, and ultra sleek neck
and gently took, from lakeside edge,
my offering of food, then swan and I
began to try contacting, eye to eye.
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Fay Slimm
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Bursting with beauty! Well done my friend! 10/10

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Daniel Kempson 06 January 2010

Swan lake revisited lovely Fay top marks Daniel 10

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C. P. Sharma 06 January 2010

And thus the swan left its abode Singing last duet in elegy mode. CP

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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