Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Wife To Husband Comments

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you seem so tired
you seem so exhausted
your not wanting steps
are clearly visible,
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prapti choudhary
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Kishore Kumar Das 24 March 2016

sometimes it happens...till a trigger is there... nice poem..

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Rishi Thakkar 08 January 2016

Lovely relatable well penned :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2015

It makes you to smile for a while when stupid talks take place as you try to chase joy you are so happy when he is already with you to pass through all happy moments

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Gajanan Mishra 31 October 2015

nothing is right, but we should keep our thought in right.. go on. keep poetic relation. Leave not poetry at any time..

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Vishal Sharma 14 October 2015

nicely penned poetry i like it

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

may be he needs some time to relax? poem full of care! nice!

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