Friday, September 6, 2013

Wife Ssentimental Journey Comments

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For fifty years they were together as husband and wife
And like all married couples they would bicker and fight.
Then the day came that GOD called her away
And with him she could not stay.
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Patricia Grantham 24 September 2013

An excellent write my friend. This poem of love touched me deeply. All the letters and responses that was read must have been to read. You wrote this poem in such a special way that it lives and breathes with joy. Well done! It stole my heart!

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Hans Vr 11 September 2013

A fantastic story. Very well written The story moved me truly.

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