Wednesday, October 21, 2020

Wife's Retaliation.... Comments

Rating: 4.8

No woman in love
With her hubby
Ever choose to say
I can't wait for thee
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Varsha M
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Susan Williams 28 August 2022

But had nothing but haunting eyes that label her as bad.---- this poem is powerful in its impact---a five star poem for all to read

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

waow _ you should be celebrated for this piece _ it should be used in marriage seminars so inspiring and educational. Please do consider reading a few of mine like 'Power of Surrender'

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Varsha M 25 May 2021

Thank-you Indira ma'am for your wonderful review. It's really encouraging.

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Indira Renganathan 25 May 2021

Very wonderful write....excellently remarkable poem...no one will disagree with what you have said.....inspiring...5*****

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M Asim Nehal 21 April 2021

Yes if pushed against the wall such retaliation is bound to bounce back. You dealt the subject very sensibly and conveyed the message perfectly.5***

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 December 2020

Choose to be submissive Like a toy, but she becomes Ardhanareeswaran always. Fine poem Varsha

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2020

But even then she understands and respect And even though she can do many things Choose to be submissive to him Respecting his masculinity. a very clever wife who thinks and respects makes the life together a heaven. tony

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Chinedu Dike 01 December 2020

Really a witty bit of verse set aside for deep reflective thought. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020

Don't blame her that she had unfaithful intentions For she too is a being with flesh and blood fabrications And must have broken in the dearth of support she need But had nothing but haunting eyes that label her as bad. Marital relationships, its problems. love, care and concern. you have wonderfully written about it dear poetess. tony

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 October 2020

To get your soul mate as your husband is of great luck. Otherwise, it is a dreary journey, full of remorse and regrets. Merely existing and tolerating each other as husband and wife is, indeed, a boring life. Your poem highlights the sorrow of many wives who have not known what true love is. Though a sad poem, Varsha, you have been honest in portraying the bitter truth. Heartiest Congratulations on your 499th poem, dear Varsha....5 Stars

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

Wife's Retaliation/// congrats for being selected this beautiful ode as POD.......from me 5***** /// beautiful crystal watery iamge

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

Don't ever put your wife in such situation Where she happens to make a big mistake, then Don't blame her that she had unfaithful intentions/// beautiful poem penned on the human understanding, specially woman when she becomes wife; yes if we, the masculine gender loves a feminine gender, we need to understand them, the feminine gender; yes, they have also rights to live independently; but for our misunderstanding we can't blame them as unfaithful!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 28 October 2020

A wise and beautifully written verse. Congratulations on Poem of the Day.

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Hannatu Adamu 28 October 2020

After all, she is of the fairer!

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Kevin Patrick 28 October 2020

Marriage is a balancing act of two people on a wire, they must work together or fall to doom. I see it as a game of suffering.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2020

Humility! ! To be submissive! ! ! Muse of morality! Between man and woman; Able to make a perfect family! Positiveness is the key. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 28 October 2020

Congratulations for the honours POTD, this is a beautiful poem. How nicely you kept the best image for your 499th poem. Another congratulations for completing 500 poems.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 28 October 2020

Excellent excellent poem. Let me go irritate my Barbie Doll see what happens. Prolly nothing after 38 years of squabbling.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 October 2020

A wonderful poem that divulges a very sensible aspect of womanhood! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being displayed today as Poem of the Day.

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Rajnish Manga 28 October 2020

As a keen observer of human behaviour, you have treated the subject quite sensibly giving it the seriousness it deserves especially against the backdrop of traditional Indian couples in our families. Thanks.

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