Saturday, September 9, 2006

Wife Beating Comments

Rating: 5.0

The door slams
Hi honey im home
Last night is still vivid in her mind
Broken plates
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James Clive
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Patricia Gale 20 January 2007

Heart wrenching, but oh so true the hope he will change...

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belle robin 10 September 2006

from one who got away, what can i say? that day never comes, you know when its not you hes doing it to, it will be another frightened lady, sad but true....

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William Jackson 09 September 2006

Paralyzed by fear she lives in delusion. Great poem. Heart breaking and all too true.

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Moon Batchelder 09 September 2006

tragic...short but so true...a whole dark history contained in these brief lines...well done...goosebumps...and sadness..

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James Clive

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