Wife Beater (Limerick) Comments
There was once a fat, ugly, wife beater
He was also a drunk and a cheater
His chair a hot iron rod
Made by the will of God
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Interesting, enjoyed it..................................................
not bad for a 'first limerick'! rhyming and meter seem good. some would say the content is not 'limerick material' perhaps, but i like it enough! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - what was god thinking! ? ? Though he was fat, he could have been thin. All sorts of 'men' are capable of sin. God did what gods sometimes do. [God did make quite a few.] THAT 'man' should have gone in the 'reject' bin! ! bri :)
A brilliantly crafted limmerick Ayman. Fusing humour with seriousness is always a tough job that you did almost effortlessly.. Thanks for sharing..
Ha..... ha! ......... It's fun! Besides you like to remind everyone that the wicked shall be punished! !
Deep envision. Wife beater must be punished by sitting on a hot iron rod. Many thanks dear Ayman keep the ball rolling.
Thank you too sir for taking the time to read and appreciate. Gratitude.
Fun, yet serious limerick my friend. May all wife-beaters sit on a hot iron rod
So my dearest fellow poet and best pal on Ph did u like the dedication part. The truth is I learned the love of a Limerick from your Limericks. Thank you.
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7/29/2025 9:38:36 PM # 1.0.0
God was perhaps too kind. Violence perpetrated against anyone ever is deplorable. To use it against a spouse is far beyond that. Luckily your poem avoids getting too depressing because 1. Justice is served 2. Limericks are just fun Nicely done Ayman