I held her hands, on bended knees
Eyes gone red, tears rolling down my cheeks
I kissed her lips, so cold and dry
Her touch in mine triggered me to cry
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This is so beautiful and emotional. The grief of the subject is so vividly displayed in the poem! I love it! Definately a tear-jerker! Very deep poem. Great job! Paige
Nicely expressed to a vivid memory of futility and despair that embraces the coming to terms with loss. The poem has a tremendous feel of shock and grief to it that is richly displayed by depth of emotion.
this si perfect sir.. you are good. um, i loved your rhymes and choice of words..
a very touching write with a fine-flowing words.. sad, , , convincing words... heart-breaking piece 10+++
a heartrending poem...deep emotional write..well narrated...10