Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Widower's Confession Comments

Rating: 5.0

I held her hands, on bended knees
Eyes gone red, tears rolling down my cheeks
I kissed her lips, so cold and dry
Her touch in mine triggered me to cry
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Joey Infante
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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

a heartrending poem...deep emotional write..well narrated...10

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Paige S 02 May 2009

This is so beautiful and emotional. The grief of the subject is so vividly displayed in the poem! I love it! Definately a tear-jerker! Very deep poem. Great job! Paige

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Brett Ackerman 01 May 2009

Nicely expressed to a vivid memory of futility and despair that embraces the coming to terms with loss. The poem has a tremendous feel of shock and grief to it that is richly displayed by depth of emotion.

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MES PLGB 30 April 2009

wow! cool poem! good job

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this si perfect sir.. you are good. um, i loved your rhymes and choice of words..

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Miriam Maia Padua 30 April 2009

a very touching write with a fine-flowing words.. sad, , , convincing words... heart-breaking piece 10+++

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