Monday, September 21, 2015

Widow's Tears Comments

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You left me deserted
In the widow’s desert
Where my heart parched
Your presence I thirsted
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Paul Sebastian
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Valsa George 25 September 2015

To lose one's loving partner prematurely is something unbearable! The sense of loneliness and helplessness that ensue with a dear one's absence is something so depressing! You have captured the agony and frustration of a widow in arresting words!

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Kelly Kurt 21 September 2015

Very touching, Paul. Thank you for sharing

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Anita Sharma 21 September 2015

brilliant write paul..emotional and powerful writing.liked loved much

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