Thursday, December 16, 2004
Wide Open Spaces Comments
Rating: ★4.0
A walk in a park full of wide open spaces
of wide blue skies and bright happy faces,
I sat there with you.
And you sat with me.
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Warren Augustus de Guzman
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Herbert Nehrlich1
17 December 2004
I like this. Simplicity. I like HER already, just listening between the lines. Lovely structure of the poem, don't show this critique to anyone. H
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7/19/2025 1:41:56 PM # 1.0.0
I liked this too, and the structure was a pleasant surprise... But, the rhyme is a bit forced. Still, a good effort.