Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Wide Open Spaces Comments

Rating: 4.5

Boyhood memories
Of a school with tree-filled
Wide open spaces
Where we would play ‘Kings and Queens'
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Tan Pratonix
COMMENTS
Darwin Henry Beuning 29 October 2016

Tan, Nice poem, memories of our yesterdays. What is the name of the school and where is it located? I am surprised that it still exists. My Minnesota school has been torn down and a new one stands in its place. Another 10.

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Geoffrey Fafard 28 October 2016

Hello Tan.Sorrow can be memory's destroyer. Sad but beautifully described.I felt like I was there watching on your re visit.Well penned. cheers Geoffrey

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Amitava Sur 28 September 2015

A remarkable write with a heavy heart find the non existence or a shabby appearence of childhood's fond memories. Very rightly painted that picture here in this poem.

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