Wide Eyed Comments

A beautiful poem and nicely written with rhythm.

lets us know what's in store. nicely written

beautiful ink. the heart always expecting someone may give him something is open as well as the eyes even in death.touching ink.

I interpret this to be about someone who, in life, observed everything about him. Now, in death, his eyes are still open because this is how he lived. Very thought provoking, Very well written.

Wide eyed..... like a mirror allowing every image to fall on... ever in awe of the captured marvels! A great write! A diametrically opposite stance, you will see in my latest poem 'Then- Now'.. if interested please read! !

staying wide eyed seeing everything. nothing is missed. good write

A beautiful poem, lost in his own wandering thoughts a lovely line worthy of a praise.

How can you write so beautifully? Fabulous articulation. How many times Ive been left in my own wandering thoughts I wonder? !

Beautiful poem..loved reading it..Great message it carries..

A great poem, some people take everything in, they see things that some people don't.

good write, thanks, silent pleading is here.