Monday, June 16, 2014

Wide Awake Comments

Rating: 4.0

these nights have been so selfish to me, so cruel
sleepless eyes, dreams deprived
mind awake of thoughts swirling in a downward spiral
a maelstrom storming round and round
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Cris Ben
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Colleen Courtney 16 June 2014

Love this poem on the terrors of the things we face in our waking hours. Love the line, Screams on silent prayers. Beautifully done!

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Lyn Paul 16 June 2014

There is darkness there for us all yet we have to close our eyes and see past this. Yet sometimes easier said than done. Nicely expressed. Thank you

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