Wicked Love Comments

You writing just flows like a beautiful river.

Love the word use in this poem, its an odd(in a brilliant way) poem, extrodinary approach at wording thoughts, Fairplay!

i like it alot, its as if the women is seducing this man unintentionally and hes falling in love with her. Good :)

i like the passion in your words, your theme- very sad, and truthful. lungelo

blue bear, just glitter- eternally

wow - you and i both on 9... fate... cloud 9 coming for us both... hang in there as will i too... your writing is good, very very good - I enjoyed reading all. Thank you X

This poem had lots of excellent imagery and wordplay. There were a few occasions, however, where I thought some revision was needed (in some cases it felt like words were missing) . I liked it a lot. Please read some of my poems if you have the time. Thanks!

this is an amazing work of art...I love the last four lines...fantastic poem.

it was b'z it was meant to... nothing can dig a hole in quicksand.... let it be... just let it be... its happened in every life.. once.. if not pray for it to happen.....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is what poems are written about... why regret...a thing of pure divine beauty... love...! !

The poem really spins with a turbulent forces of a vexatious conundrum. In any case, to deflect any awkwardness on my part, I see you perceive the moral ramifications: where’s the free will for this uncomfortable predicament? It's as if to say: Who is the real me (anyhow) ? ....or is this just a case of latent insecurities gone bad? -whatever you want to call it-the words have a ripe, challenging proposition of how considered romantic adventures might explain inappropriate behavior.