Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, August 26, 2012

Wicked Animal Comments

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Man is basically wicked animal
No one can see his ideas even if naked
Either before computer or before sky
He will struggle with his mind and try
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2012

gud Comment +1 Good effort Peter J Brown13 hours ago Good meaning, the poem needs a bit of tinkering regarding the flow/rhyme, in my opinion, to come up to the standard of content.Comment +1 a poem of life Keep writing :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2012

Alan Green 'Guppyman'13 hours ago the poet tells of all the lives lived Comment +1 i like wicked animals

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2012

Chyna Bug13 hours ago ok animals are scary some times

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Very True zeek estrada24 minutes ago Nice! Comment +1 GOOD

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Julia Davis14 minutes ago Well written

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Man is basically wicked animal No one can see his ideas even if naked

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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