Sunday, January 14, 2018

Why You Run Away From Me My Love Comments

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WHY YOU LEAVE ME MY LOVE

Ooh am stand at the middle of world.
I see my beautifully bird running.
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ndidzulafhi munyai patric
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Mahtab Bangalee 22 October 2019

love always beautiful! but when this love wanna live far away then the pain begins it melancholic path on the heart! ! ! !

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 22 May 2018

Great work Ndidzulafhi......10+++ The voice came from nowhere Sometimes love hurt and stink like a beer.... I could relate and feel how you felt when she flee and Leave you but you couldn't fly with her for you had no winds

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Naila Rais 10 May 2018

A nice write.. Keep courage.... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

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Thanx a lot

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 January 2018

Such an interesting poem...10++++

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Thanks a lot

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