Why You Comments

'my heart's funeral, I carry this coffin, it lies still loving you. Wow. Beautiful, sad, lonely. how do I dry my eyes. Gawd, yes, how? Keep writing until all the feelings have left. Just wonderful, would love the words to stay in my brain so I can say them over and over. So poetic

Can definitely feel all those mixed up and crazy emotions come through! Love how they come straight from the heart. As if you just sat down and wrote out everything this person makes you feel. Well done! An honest write!

Nice job...the title needs a qustion mark, and, please can`t not cant!

Very very nice! ! ! I feel the words you write. Take time to read some of mine.

I like this! Good work!

A beautiful poem. For a while thought you were talking to me! Love you!

wonderful poem, |*tears while reading*|

i can relate, i cant escape

This poems rythm is soothing yet melancholy and I loved your clear imagery. Now I just can't let go, and it just hurts, my hearts funeral. Also, I found that was is lost, but is still there to be a very clever line.

wish it was someone else, just not you...! ! ! ! The person in this poem has come to her senses and at last decides something that is very useful for her in future, instead of fighting for the same man and his attention day and night through out her life. Girls, When we have the opportunity to have a person for our own use, why do, a few of you, go after another person's boyfriend or a husband?

Dear lady i live with this daily too.. perhaps its not them perhaps its just us disliking that we are committed and wishing to sever the ties through fear of things crashing....i love this write as through my version of events and life i totally understand this... tyvm karen

Beautifully written and a unique metaphor, a forbidden love, 'my hearts funeral, / i carry this coffin, it lies still loving you, ' is quite wonderful.

lovely poem indeed....

Another lovely poem.......