Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Why? Why? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Why? Why?
Was I so far away,
In the sun,
Happy,
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Sophie Shaw
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Cass Irwin 26 April 2008

This was nothing to do with you, you had no part in it whatsoever. No one could have stopped it no matter how much they wanted to. Love you x

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Sophie Shaw 06 March 2008

I never got to say goodbye to this person, as i was in cyprus. A very emotional poem that came from thre heart

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C.R. Clark 05 March 2008

Sadly, grief is a part of life. Your line, 'you have passed on to a better place' is knowledge that can be very comforting. Thanks, a wonderful write Richard

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Roger Cornish 05 March 2008

Grief spoken with warm softness! Very nice poem.... Rx

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