Thursday, November 29, 2012

Why Walk With Soul So Dead? Comments

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Why walk with soul so dead?
Why move as to pretend?
Why eat with such a dread?
Why drink with easing bend?
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Osama Waqar
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Vikram Babu T R 20 September 2013

Its a Very Excellent Poem

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Asif Andalib 02 December 2012

Beautiful write Waqar. Keep it up

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Shahzia Batool 29 November 2012

Better done than what is said........ in all this interrogative tone and setting, you did not only raise questions so daring and deep, but provided implicit answers to them as well...these are the questions of life, and about life, even the repetition of Why does not give any monotonous effect...you have a Divinely-gifted control over natural rhyming...thanks a lot for sharing this poem...

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Osama Waqar

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