Saturday, August 25, 2018

Why This Tears Comments

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Some branches stay strong
during a soft breeze
But breaks down when there
is a storm
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2018

A piece of work with great substance! Thanks dear Rini for sharing.......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2018

One should not tear for the lost as It gives a new hope and a new beginning to life. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 August 2018

Nature is like that. When you see the entire tree lost in a storm, you forget the roots under ground, that can germinate again. You forget the tiny seeds that will grow into a tree tomorrow. As Malayalam poet has written in the famous poemപാവം മാനവഹൃദയം, (paavam maanavahrudhayam”) we tend to forget the ills of the past very fast, rejoice even on a hint of a green shoots. That is how we are... Good one, this poem.

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Regards 26 August 2018

A very insightful piece of work! Brief but powerful!

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Lamar Cole 25 August 2018

Great poem about why these tears.

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Rajnish Manga 25 August 2018

This should be the attitude. Never lose hope. There is always scope for a new beginning. So, why these tears. Thanks, Rini.

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Bill Cantrell 25 August 2018

A very good poem! ! Deep roots are the foundation for permanence

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