Why not let troubled things talk and hold council with you?
Or do you relish the birth-pangs' banging between clashes?
Things can't talk, yes, or can they? !
You may only proffer your own fantasy
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In these lines you have given an explicit picture of you mind. The thoughts traveling, meditating on the surroundings, silently speaking and making the readers aware. Only a sensitive poet is conscious of such minute gestures…things here is connotated in various ways…whether man, God or inanimate thing…a very unusual and unique theme…loved reading it.
We all talk to things. And they are alive because of the energy flowing from us to them. But sometimes it's the other way round and we are the ones who get energy from them. Thanks for your feedback on my poem 'Full'. Warmly, Julia
Very interesting concept Erhard. It would be very interesting to hear what the ''things'' in this world would say to us...if given the chance. Very nice. Sincerely, mary
This is the poem and these are the words of a very religious man. The subject is very creative poem. I have no doubt this is true of others as well. Greenwolfe 1962