Sunday, September 20, 2009

Why They Have To Do Me Like That Comments

Rating: 4.3

Why i have to be born?
birthed in the middle of a stubborn war
when i was about three or four
my moms hit me on top of my head
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Christina Phan 22 September 2009

wow very sad and scary 10+++ keep up the gd work

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Eyan Desir 21 September 2009

Scary write sorry You had to put this a 10

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Erin Ford 21 September 2009

this makes me think about my friend that has been trough this to.i feel for both of you.

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James Thomson 20 September 2009

wow...i felt the pain in this poem as it reminded me of my childhood...great poem...10+++...my favorite of your collection

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Stephan Mclean 20 September 2009

Really moving poem....10

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Paizli Palmrose 20 September 2009

I am amazed at the beauty which emerges from so much pain. You are so right. To move on you have to let go. Bless you and your journey.

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may third ate the three
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