Thursday, January 1, 2004

Why The Jackass Laughs Comments

Rating: 2.9

The Boastful Crow and the Laughing Jack
Were telling tales of the outer back:
"I've just been travelling far and wide,
At the back of Bourke and the Queensland side;
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A B Banjo Paterson
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Spock The Vegan 05 December 2014

Very nice poem. You have 'out present plan' when I think you meant 'our present plan.' Also if I can make a suggestion: your first verse has 9 lines - the last line rhymes with the first line of verse 2. I would put those lines in the same verse (2) .

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