Thursday, February 16, 2023

Why The Big Sigh Comments

Rating: 5.0

Going through life like a calm breeze
Balancing struggles to keep things at ease
Achieving little goals for us to appease
Finding lost time to continue to breathe
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D.N. Rebb
COMMENTS
Richard Wlodarski 17 February 2023

A wildly introspective poem written in such an entertaining style! Makes you think! But in such a fun way! Loved this poem, Rebb! !

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The great message " Trying to keep a smile on your face " is well taken. Let's us all follow the advice

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I enjoyed the poem. Marvellous. Fantastic rhyme scheme.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 February 2023

Yes it was enjoyable DN

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Jayne Louise Davies 16 February 2023

An enjoyable poem! Thank you for sharing x

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