Sunday, June 23, 2019

Why Should Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why should I wear kajal
As only one of your admiring glance
can add sparkle to my eyes?
Why should I wear lipstic,
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Bharati Nayak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2021

Why should I wear lipstic, When the very thought of my love Can add color to my lips? ............yes, natural beauty has no substitute! !

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

As a poet you have asked very important questions to all whom are dissatisfy with their natural beauty, it is so poignant and well penned poem, well done, full mark and onto my fav list

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

well done, hope to stay on the top list always 468 on top 500 poets Congratulations

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 January 2020

Written for a poetry challenge, and the challenge was truly taken well. Why should I, need I say anything more?

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Queeny Gona 11 January 2020

Material things doesn't matter and can never stand before love. Beauty in thought and love at heart is apprehended! Enjoyed the read Ma'am!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 October 2019

no need there is the kajal, no, no need there is the lipstick, no, no need there is a disguise o this is heart heart of spring, spring always makes bloom here the rose of love yes, love o love no need there is a disguise for YOU..........///

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The very thought of you brings a spring in full bloom. Sublime love!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2019

Really it is a beautiful poem on love having a touching expression through kajal, lipstic and sweet breeze. Thank you a lot.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2019

The dance of true love! ! 💃🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 June 2019

O'Love! with your thought My steps acquire spring And my heart dances With the sweet breeze. EXQUISITE THE LOVE WITHIN THE BREEZE WILL FOR EVER... GREATEST POET BN WITHIN YOU FREEZE

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2019

O'Love! with your thought/My steps acquire spring/And my heart dances/With the sweet breeze.....captivating poetic expression! A befitting poem for poetry competition! A rapturous work....10

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Bharati Nayak 24 June 2019

Thank you Dillip for your lovely comment.

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Jane Campion 23 June 2019

Dear Bharati, a poem that shows others' thoughts, and ours, are more effective than how we appear. Well penned.

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Bharati Nayak 23 June 2019

Thank you Jane Campion for your kind read and encouraging comment.

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