Monday, August 18, 2014

Why Should You Know Me? Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day all have to depart,
Away from the human eyes,
Although I'll not be here,
My presence will be felt,
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Aftab Alam
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Beautiful poem with lovely flow of words...... I am the history, I will rest in peace, I will lose everything, Except the love that you keep in your heart, Because you know, I'm not flirt I am always alert, I am the wheel of the time Very true said, I am the wheel of the time. I loved reading each lines, happy to learn all the beautiful qualities you are blessed with and will remain in the heart of friends forever..Thanks for sharing with us. Loved reading it.

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Dinesan Madathil 20 August 2014

In total you have presented the best possible spectrum of yourself, I assume. Aftabji, these traits must be making you a very dear person among your close friends and relatives. A fine poem that deserves a 10 out of 10.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 August 2014

All the heavenly things you carry......Aftab.......very nicely composed......I love reading your poems

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Heather Wilkins 18 August 2014

this is a beautiful telling of all the things you are. And a wonderful collection of goodness. just lovely

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