Friday, June 23, 2017

Why Should I She Said Comments

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What do you see? he said
Startling her
What do you mean? she said
Turning to him
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Edmund Strolis
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Norah Tunney 25 June 2017

Beautiful images of nature and love. I read it a few times and it left me feeling deep sense of joy and peace. Thank you Edmund Why should I she said Why should she indeed.

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Pamela Sinicrope 24 June 2017

This is so sweet! This is love. Or at least, this is what should be like. Mutual appreciation of nature and of each other. I feel lighter after reading this one. Beautiful images.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2017

Watching geese sitting in sunlight amazes mind entirely. Floating regal across the pond scribbles mind more and more. This is interesting poem very well penned. Excellent poem metaphorically presented with beauty, love and perception of nature.10

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