Looking out of the windows small or large
And I can feel it for myself
A Dying spring ushering in a spell of heat!
The sky is no more shady or pale
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In Indian cities the woes of summer is often compounded by prolonged power cuts. These two villains often join hand to pulverize us into pulp. An enchanting poem.
Dying spring will not last any more Scorching summer awaits. Rainy season was severe. There is no where to go. Poem brings all these out in a powerful way.
the advent of summer is experienced by all of us and is so well portrayed in ur poem...sir but y blame ur poor wife for the tea she serves! after all the sweetnees lies not in the tea, but in the heart! : -)
Great words Perhaps you should consider iced tea in your heated season.
By modifying SUMMER with the scene of people working in the field or roads, sir, we can open the windows for breeze.
The glistening of sweaty beads hv joined us once again indeed.....a villian that is growing fiercer every year....a consequence of misuse sinces ages of this globe....so well expressed....here comes the tiring summer...
A scorching summer is waiting outside! Even before its ceremonious entry, we have begun to experience its parching presence! The misgivings and uncertainty of a state getting bifurcated adds to the woes.... I think the hot strong tea, not sweetened goes well with the season...! ! (so thoughtfully served by a wife who is so anxiously concered about her husband's health!) Enjoyed this partially humorous and partially serious poem! ! A 10 for this
Beautiful poem filled with humour, summer. Very true said....The villain - the SUMMER of this 2014.. Pangs on bifurcation.....This summer will take everyone on its grip....You have penned it very well beautifully.
The contrast between everyday things and the anticipation of what is ahead creates a tension which I think works really well. Thank you drawing my attention to it. Anne
Emotions, humour and anguish very cleverly portrayed here........Dineshji.........Summer, humour on tea and pangs on bifurcation..........very well composed as usual.......
Pity we can't combine our summer with yours Dinesh, and get something moderate. Enjoyed reading.