Saturday, October 25, 2008

Why Should I Be The Bait For You To Satiate Upon My Irritation? Comments

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I could make more sense,
If I chose to leave you some.
But I know if I did...
A clarity would not be recognized.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Rani Turton 25 October 2008

This is a poem that many people wouldn't understand. A person who serves as bait as you say so aptly, has been selcted as the victim by a dominant personality and the fact that you refuse this role and put it into words does you a lot of credit. Bravo!

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