Why Should I Comments

good release of your feelings, and good explanation of an friendship ending tragically.

Now that one is a little better...it totally smells like skunk x2 when people try to make you feel bad and guilty...don't let them get to you it's just part of their game. I speak to everyone. Tolerance is essential. My fAVorite lines are: you pretended that you cared because you were scared

A poem of a 17 year old with 12 year old mistakes, but the rhythm is good. You have a gift that will improve if you study.

This is a deep poem, I love it. It brings out anger, hurt, and passion, all at the same time keeping calm and sophisticated. A wonderful piece of art. GOD bless you.

interesting I like this strong message keep it up

Wow this poem is really deep.....i felt like intense the whole time that i was reading this lol awesome job Tyease