Friday, April 11, 2008

Why Pt.2 Comments

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Why is their death
people say people live for a reason
but why do some people die so young.
Why are there illnesses.
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Anne Ornelas
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I don't agree with this poem but I can relate to feeling this way at one point in my younger years. (Not that I am that old now *smile*)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 April 2008

the answer is live and die is part and parcel................

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Sky Mccoy 11 April 2008

I like this. It shows how screwed up the world is at the moment with these diseases and stuff like that. And some people really don't seem to care much either and I like how you pointed that out. Keep writing

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Pandora Chaos 11 April 2008

i wonder about that 2 an i h8 when people say that they care when they really dont its stupid. nice poem its a bit short but nice.

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