Wednesday, July 27, 2022

Why Pretend? Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you distance yourself from truth
You create a rift between you and God
You have to hide your face behind masks
To save the false impression you spread,
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2022

Revisiting this meaningful and wonderful poem. The powerful closure lines are thoughts to ponder about. Very inspiring.

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Susan Williams 14 August 2022

you write truth

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Indira Renganathan 09 August 2022

This one poem is enough to brightly reveal the fake face of a corrupt man....extraordinary write in simple words...greatly inspired by this poem....thanks a lot friend....the best poem beyond rating and remarks

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Soran M. H 07 August 2022

pure message and close to humanity has sent through this stunning piece of work, that has to be read by mankind these days is

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Soran M. H 07 August 2022

Why pretend rich with an empty wallet Why pretend gentle with vices practiced

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 05 August 2022

Thank you for sharing this superb poem, which exposes the guile behind the mask.5 stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 July 2022

A beautiful and powerful poem that expresses in great detail the acts of pretensions. Wonderful insight. Top Marks!

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Thank you very much dear RMJ. I have been watching pretensions and masking of so called gentleman maligning the true face of society. The truth has really hurt me

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 July 2022

A vicious cycle of lies and pretensions are manifestations of evilness. Liked the title. It drew me to read the whole write.

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Exposing the bogus human nature.Superb.

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Thank you very much. We must be aware of the artificial personalities.

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2022

One lie leads to many other lies.

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2022

Why pretend rich with an empty wallet Why pretend gentle with vices practiced Why pretend cultured with meanness inside Why pretend powerful before the most powerful---Your poem is a powerful voice against pretension.

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Thank you dear poetess. I have been feeling annoyed before such futile pretensions since my boyhood onwards

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Nabakishore Dash 29 July 2022

Extremely good piece dear Nair.pretensions would increase punishment.True100%.

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Yes, dear poet. Pretensions attract severe punishments

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Wonderfully true. Takes a hard look at pretentiousness and exhorts to be truthful. But people who enjoy being vile for short term gains, continue to hide their true countenance under gay masks. Nice poem. Top

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Thank you dear Unnikrishnan. When light falls on the dark face behind masks we feel pity for them and avoid them

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2022

This is truly an excellent poem....I sincerely appreciate the truthful voice that emanates from the core of this insightful piece. Top score! !

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Thank you very much dear Dr. Dillip. If pretension are given due despise false personalities may not pop up

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Thank you so much dear Dr.Dillip. You have really made me confident that maligned viruses are conspicuously spoiling the true face of humanity

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 July 2022

I really enjoyed this incredible poem

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Thank you very much for the unfriendly attitude towards pretensions

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