Monday, February 8, 2010

Why Oh Why Comments

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Me a man of many words but they have gone away,
they left me the day you went astray.
Why oh Why did you have to cheat on me,
you could have just ended it and i could rest.
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Daniel Travers
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C. Wega 08 February 2010

WOW! Lovely, quite lovely indeed. I love the rhyme scheme on your poem and the meaning is deep too. sorry you had to go thru sucha tough time but hey! you made up for it. Please keep writting?

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